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(Main building. 20:01)

Later, Wat-Senn was with Ben and Julie outside of the village hall, likely to be kept in the dark of what is going down as Ben paced a bit, annoyed. "UGH...I wish I knew what was going on in there…" Ben muttered in annoyance, especially over what Kundo said as Wat-Senn just relaxed...before casually getting out his plumber's badge.

"Why is he acting like this? I mean...Rook's relative was a Plumber too, was he not?" asked Skurd asked as Ben just continued to grumble in frustration. Julie looked up at this, surprised as did Wat-Senn.

"Wait, where'd you-...the plaque, eh? Take it you found it? Figured someone might…" Wat-Senn said with a sigh as he pressed a button on his badge as the feedback is heard to get a signal without Rook realizing it. "Come on, I'll lead ya'll to the meeting. Make sure that Kundo doesn't do anything stupid." He motioned them along as he says, "Though...I'd suggest stealth." He pressed a button on an ID mask and it made him vanish from sight as he put it on.

Julie nods as she says, "Ship, Stealth." Ship nods as he wraps around her, turning on her stealth suit as she vanished. Ben slammed down on the Omnitrix...turning into a small flea-like alien.

"The Itch? Well...better than nothin'." said the flea-like alien as he jumped ahead as Skurd rolled his eyes. Stinkfly's wings withdrew out of its back to allow for more distance as they flew around, Wat-Senn whispering to them to keep ahead as they went to a room; the senior Plumber setting a signal up for them to be able to hear what is being said.

Inside, the Revonnahganders were in front of a large glowing crystal as various smaller ones were hung all around, Rook sitting across from where Kundo would sit as the older Revonnahgander began to pace, frowning a bit.

"You have been a grave disappointment, Rook Blonco. Allowing yourself to be tempted by the same folly as your uncle, to betray our people by leaving Revonnah...and allowing off worlders to come during our most sacred of times." Kundo said, his tone icy as Rook clenched a fist.

"With all due respect, mentor, but this is a grave issue that is not just in our village. And do not bring my uncle into this. Rook Fra sacrificed his to save our planet. It is why I wanted to be a hero like him." Rook said, as Kundo scoffed at this.

"So little you children know of your own uncle...and of your pure irony…" said Kundo, as Da was about to stand up but Kundo only glared at him, stopping him in his tracks as Shar looked at her younger siblings in concern.

"What does he mean?" Itch asked himself, as he pressed his ear against the door as he snuck under the crack, buzzing around to avoid light...only to see an odd-looking lantern as he says, "Oooh...pretty…" He started to fly towards it.

"No, it is a trap!" Skurd said, slapping him in the face with a tentacle, snapping the flea-like alien out of it. The Itch hastily nodded, flying to a spot to get a good view. Kundo sneered at the Rook family as he put his hands behind his back.

"For those that aren't aware or too young to remember, many years ago a group of Plumbers came to Revonnah as a rogue agent came to our planet. Your uncle, Rook Fra, took him on and tried to fight him but was ended by a blast from the agent's own laser." He advanced forward, leaning into Rook's face and growling darkly, eyes ablaze as he hissed, "Burned through his heart in an instant… he was dead before he even hit the floor. Unlike what that Wat-senn character says, they pollute the universe with their brazen disregard for other planets sanctities. Try to make themselves the 'law' of this galaxy. Despite that many just wish to remain on their own." Kundo explained, as the Revonnahganders just looked unsure.

"Kundo…" Rafi whispered in a warning tone as Da looked to the side at this, sighing a bit as Rook got up, glaring at his mentor.

"That is not true, Master Kundo!"a voice shouted in protest. Kundo's head swerved to the side to Young One, who glared at the older Revonnahgander. Kundo response was merely another curl of his lips into a sneer. "The Plumbers protected us from the Highbreed, remember? Wat-Senn stayed after the invasion to make sure no one could hurt us. All the while we are stuck behind the walls!"

"Young One, do not speak out of turn…" Bralla said in concern, as the Itch watched in concern for the kid as Rook stood in front of Kundo, glaring at him.

"Mother, Young One is correct. I have been beyond the wall for a couple of years now. And it reminded me of what Rook Fra wanted for the Revonnahganders of this village; to be able to not be afraid of what is beyond the stars. Something you clearly want us to continue to do. You may be my mentor and a respected elder, Kundo...but you are wrong about the Plumbers. They wish to protect our world and many others." Rook said, as Kundo clenched his fist in anger at the insolence. Rook looked to his father, seeing the uncertainty on the older being's face. "Father...do you not see what is going on? Our way of life is in danger, but Kundo doesn't want us to do anything!"

"THAT is because it was because of outside influence that this is even occurring! If it was not for the Plumbers, no one would even come here!" Kundo said, his tone dark and filled with a warning. "It is just like you, Rook Blonco...as insolent and brazen fool of a boy as your uncle before you. I guess I must show you discipline that your father clearly failed to do."

"My father is twice a man you are." Rook said, his eyes narrowing a bit. Kundo's lips curled into a ferocious snarl and his fist immediately clenched. The warrior lifted his arm in the air to strike, but Da's eyes widened when he saw this.

"Son, move!" Da said as he pushed his son aside, and took the blow as he got sent back, the Itch's eyes widening in horror as he saw Da hit the ground with a grunt.

"FATHER!" his children cried in horror as they rushed over to him, as Kundo scoffed at this as he walked over, his hand shimmering with a strange orange aura. The Itch saw this and glared darkly, slamming down on the Omnitrix as a faint glow came from above.

"Pathetic...I come to discipline this wretched child but you can't take that sight, can you? Well...may as well discipline you as well...make an example…" Kundo said as suddenly got tackled from behind as he saw Crashhopper glaring at him, his green eyes narrowed darkly.

"What was that you said about 'brazen disregard'?" Crashhopper said, glaring at this. "Because all I'm getting is some old creep who is so xenophobic that you're locking up your own people in a prison. Just to hide them from the outside world. You just want to be locked up in your own little box...but I'm not just gonna stand around and let you bully my friend's family." Crashhopper said with a warning tone as Da looked at this with surprise as Kundo glared at this.

"Brazen little…" He got into a stance as he slammed his fist forward, but Crashhopper ducked around and kicked him away, nodding to Skurd who nod back as he glowed a bit, making Kundo's eyes widen in shock as Slamstrike appeared before him, his eyes narrowed

"Try this!" he said as he got onto his back as he sent out a barrage of palm energy that sent the master of Revonnah Kai back as he tried in vain to block with a spin of his staff, but the impacts of the attacks shattered the weapon and sent him back a bit as he gave a small cry.

"ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORA! OOOORAAAAAAAA"

The last strike came from the final blow, sending him back a bit as Skurd gave a stern nod as he says, "And that should teach you some manners, good sir." Skurd said as Slamstrike turned back into Ben, glaring at him as Kundo groaned a bit.

"And that was for badmouthing Rook's family, jerk." Ben said as he went over to check on Da. "You okay, sir?" He asked, as Julie and Wat-Senn came in after hearing the commotion.

"...Yes, I am. Thank you, O-...Ben 10." Da said with a small grunt. "Find out who is doing this...please." Rook Da said as Rook nods, as he looks at Shar who nods.

"We will look after him and Kundo. You four go look them." Shar said as Ben nods, as they went towards a window. Julie nod to Ship, who jumps out and turns into his space ship form, as the three went on as Wat-Senn jumped in too.

"I got that miner's pack. It'll lead us to where they came from." Wat-Senn said as Julie sighed a bit, sitting down from the stress of the situation.

"Wow...that was crazy…" Julie groaned as Rook nods, sitting down as he rubbed his head. "So much for this trip being relaxing, huh?"

"I apologize for Kundo's actions...but you are right, Ben...he is only keeping my people prisoner...in our own culture, there are many traditions my grandmother told me of that have not been celebrated in years. Thanks to his more...isolated tendencies." Rook gave a soft sigh at this, looking outside as the ship went overhead, looking over the sight of other villages that were farther away...and saw that there was damage to some of the fields.

"Whatever is going on...it's gonna have to involve those Mega-Muroids." Wat-Senn said, reading the signals as he says, "That hill up head. It's coming from there." He said, as Ship landed near the hill before letting everyone off. "I'll stay here to keep an eye no things." Julie nods, as she pressed a button on her badge, causing her pink uniform to form over her.

"It's an official mission, right?" Julie asked as Ben shrugs, zipping up his coat as he nods to Rook, who nods back as as they snuck through the rocky terrain...and came across a large collection of nests surrounding what looks like a large black and gray space ship.

"Whoa…" Ben said, seeing a conveyer belt form as Rook took pictures with his Proto-Tool's scanner, before seeing someone walk up to the end of it, taking the liquid at the end.

"That is...concentrated Amber Ogia...the Amber Ogia juice is very volatile unless treated right. It's why it is good fuel...but very few can treat it correctly, as that is lost knowledge to us." Rook explained as Ben nods, seeing the person was a towering individual with dark gray armor with spikes on the wrists, boots and neckline, and a head that looked like a spiky-mouthed skull with a metal cap on it, his eyes dark orange.

"Vulkanus? Here?" Ben asked, surprised as Julie checked around and saw another familiar face and turned Ben and Rook in that direction, as they saw Fistrick with the Muroids, smirking a bit as he was looking over a light yellow vial of liquid as he put it into a device. "And Fistrick too?"

"Gotta say, big man. I'm impressed. With enough of this stuff, that starbeam I built from that techadon tech is gonna be awesome. AND with the tests done on these rats, I think I finally got my Broesence Steroid into it's final stages. Now I can use it to even the score with Tennyson, that hick sidekick and his hussy."

"WHAT IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN!?" Julie yelled out in annoyance but Ben covered her mouth after the outburst, but Fistrick looked around in confusion as Julie fumed in annoyance at that insult.

Vulkanus shrugged as he says, "Anyway...I got the harvesters set up for the next run. It's that village with a wall...these will knock them down easy." He said as he snapped his fingers as several Miners came out, all piloting large mechs with tankers on the back for the juices of the amber ogia, as they headed out.

"If they use those harvesters, they are gonna destroy the fields. Our entire way of life will be gone...and my people will lose our culture." Rook clenched his fist as Julie and Ben shared a look and nods.

"Rook, take Julie and Wat-Senn back to the village with Ship. Skurd and I got Fistrick and Vulkanus." He said as Rook nods, Ship turning into a motorcycle as Julie got on top with Rook holding onto her shoulders, as it grew out a sidecar for Wat-Senn as it drove off, Ben slamming down on the Omnitrix

"SHOCKSQUATCH!" The giant ape-like alien said as he jumped down, glaring as Fistrick got the vial at the ready when he heard him...but smirked as he attached the vial to a strange wrist guard.

"So, you're here, eh? Wanted to wait...but I guess now is a good time." He said as he activated it, Vulkanus smirking a bit as Fistrick's body began to expand a bit, his irises shining a bit of an amber color as his body began to shine from his veins, growing out a bit in height and width, turning into a 7 foot tall goliath with sharpen teeth and wilder-looking spiked mohawk. "BRO!" He roared out, smirking a bit. "A'right, let's rock this!"

"Must be a lot of testosterone in that…" said Skurd as he shifted something onto Shocksquatch's legs...as blue fur began to form as he nods, showing they were now Shocksquatch-sized versions of Fasttrack's feet, making him move faster as he sent an electric punch at him, sending him back a bit.

"How'd you two punks get to Revonnah? Why attack these people?" The bigfoot-like alien demanded, as Fistrick moved around the blasts as the ape fired a blast of lightning, but he just kicked it away with his insulated boots, smirking a tad.

"Vulkanus wanted my tech to empower something...I needed a component for my steroid. Seemed even." Fistrick as he smirked a bit. "Think about it; with this stuff, any two bit punk could become strong enough to take you on. And so you know...this stuff is permanent." He slammed a fist down, but Skurd smirked as he gained Ball Weevil's mouth and horns and fired out a barrage of slime pellets, sending Fistrick back a bit from the miniature explosives.

"So you're permanently ugly…" Shocksquatch said, Vulkanus smirking a bit as he cracked his robotic knuckles. "And why do you care? Don't you own my planet or somethin'?"Vulkanus sneered at that, annoyed.

"I had to give the deed to the Galactic Government...they said I was irresponsible with it." Vulkanus said with a sneer, glaring at this time as he slammed his fist down, creating a shockwave as it sent im back a bit with a screech. "But you won't have to worry about that…" e picked up Shocksquatch by the head and says into a communication, "Port us up." Suddenly he, the Miners and Fistrick vanished with the large ape in a beam of light.


(Back at the village. 21:45)

Ship came back to the village with Julie, Wat-Senn and Rook in tow as he stops, avoiding skidding too much as Wat-Senn got up, glaring ahead. "Warriors, to us!" Rook said as several warriors came out with spears and flares. "The Muroids are coming in force!"

The group sees the harvesters arriving as Da frowned a bit, coming up with a cane as he says, "How are we to stop these creatures and their machines, Blonco?"

"I can use my armors to help. Anyone here know Revonnah Kai besides Rook?" Julie asked as Kundo's former disciples came up, as did a familiar sight; the outsider from earlier.

"I am Ran Zarif, by the way. Thank you for saving my life." Zarif said as Rook gave him a nod, patting his shoulder as he got out a pair of tonfa-like weapons from his sleeve, glaring at the monsters as Shar got her own spear.

"Alright...aim for the Muroids and the pilots, take them out., the machines will go down with them." Rook said as he got his Proto-Tool's staff out while Julie powers up as she nods.

"Ship...Hunter mode."Julie smirked as Ship glowed, forming over Julie as she started to gain a couple feet. The armor had a canine-like appearance at about 7 feet tall with razor sharp energy claws coming from her hands with robotic legs to allow for quick movements and a visor that can track via infrared and X-ray visions, as well as pointed 'ears' on the head area with a circular form on the forehead of the helmet. She then jumped up, slashing through hte robot's legs and ripping open the front to get the miner out.

Zan and the other Revonnah Kai fighters took on the others as Shar led the farmers with some skill with their blades to take on the Miners inside of the harvesters, Rook slamming a few aside as Wat-Senn got ready.

"Okay...time ta use my gun." He said, getting his pistol out...as it began to expand, becoming five-times larger with a large cannon-like mussel with faint blue lining to it as he held it in both hands. He then fired giant rounds towards the harvesters and Muroids, causing explosive bursts to send them back.

"Awesome!...earth expression" Young One cheered and later clarified for his mother, seeing this with the others as Shar watched Rook, Julie and Wat-Senn fighting them off with a faint look of awe.

"That is amazing." Shim said, her voice soft as Shi nods eagerly as the harvesters got some of the Ogia, but saw they were overrun as one got slammed down by Zarif. He then sent a burst of chi into it, sending the miner out.

Zarif saw some of the remaining fly away as Da asks, "Blonco, where are they going?" He ducked from an attack of a Muroid as he blasted it.

"Good question…" Rook said as he pressed a button on his badge. "Ben, are you there?"

"We are quite in a predicament, Rook Blonco…" Skurd said on the other end, as Rook looked confused as Julie looked up, Ship's sensor's getting something.

"What do you mean a 'predicament', Skurd? Where are you?" Rook asked as Julie's eyes shrank a bit nervously, as she pokes at Rook's shoulder.

"Rook...Ship is picking up a radio signal...coming from out of orbit...there's some sort of spacecraft floating overhead." Julie said, as Rook went wide eyed.

"It's a Techadon Starbeam. A level 8 weapon that can destroy planets with the right power source. We are currently in it." Skurd said on the other end, as Rook looked at his badge with a panicked expression.

"WHY!?" Rook asked hastily as Skurd gave a nervous chuckle, sounding a bit embarrassed.

"Well, you see…"


"...We're stuck." Was Skurd's flat reply on the ship as he was put into a small brace-like device to keep his limbs from moving while Shocksquatch's arms were moved in energy cuffs to keep him from slamming on the insignia to switch or to use his electrokinesis.

"How long til you time out?...and how are you even able to communicate?" Julie asked on the other end.

"It's a simple thing called a 'voice command.' If this device's master control was on, we wouldn't even be having to wait til timeout…much to my annoyance...and somehow they got a DNA inhibitor collar...which is degrading I might add!" Skurd yelled out to Fistrick, who rolled his eyes.

"Seriously Tennyson, where do you get these annoying sidekicks? I thought your broad was annoying." Fistrick said, as Shocksquatch growled a bit at that insult towards Julie.

"Ya know, the minute I'm out of these cuffs, I am gonna smack that grin off ya face." Shocksquatch muttered as Skurd was frowning a bit, looking around as Vulkanus smirked as the remaining Harvesters put the liquid inside.

"Given how much of a pain they have been...time to get some fun…" Vulkanus smirked as he pressed some buttons to get the cannon charged up. "Now for the shift to high gear." Shocksquatch saw this...but realized what he said.

"...Shift...shift...that's it! Skurd, activate that Quick Shift thing Rook's little bro turned on!" Shocksquatch commanded as Skurd gave a small nods as he concentrated, trying to get into the device and nods.

"Okay, Quick Shift on." Skurd said as a holographic screen appeared from the Omnitrix insignia as a set of 10 spots. "Huh, looks like...a playlist."

"Please select up to 10 of unlocked samples." the AI says as Skurd looked around and nods, an idea forming.

"Four samples; Pyronite, Rapterian, Tetramand and Vaxasaurian. Activate." Skurd said as the quickshift put the faces on for Heatblast, Kickin' Hawk, Four-Arms and Humungousaur. Suddenly Ben shined brightly and turned into Heatblast, smirking a bit.

"ALRIGHT!" He said as he combusted a burst of intense heat, destroying the energy cuffs and the collar on Skurd, as he smirked a bit and added an additional thing onto Heatblast's arms; gaining crystals akin to Diamondhead's own and fires it out, shattering the controls with the concussive crystals, making the engine turn off as he smirks.

"GET HIM!" Fistrick roared as the miners all charged, but Heatblast was quickly changed into Kickin' Hawk, who smirks as he jumps away, ducking around as Skurd just as quickly gave him a new weapon; Exershield's energy palms as he forms a barrier around them before he sent a kicking barrage of them, using the barriers to make the pickaxes not hit him as he smirked a bit.

The miners all panted as he jumped up to the ceiling as he slams his palm down, releasing a green forcefield down and slams them down, making them groan a bit as Kickin' Hawk jumped up and turned into Four-Arms with a quick flash, glaring at Vulkanus who roared out and slams a fist at him, who ducked around as he nods.

"Try this." Skurd said as he turned Four-Arm's upper arms into Frankenstrike's arms with the large spires growing out of his back before slamming them onto his armor, creating powerful blasts of electricity as it began to fall apart.

"Ah man…" Vulkanus muttered as he pressed a button on the harness for his armor, making it vanish as Fistrick growled.

"YOU COWARD! That's it, I'm gonna rip you in half, bro!" Fistrick said as he jumped at him, but Four-Arms shined into Humongasaur quickly before slamming him with his tail, growing into about 40 feet tall and glaring him down.

"Nice try, smallfry." Humungousaur said as he nods to Skurd, who smirks deviously as he stretches out into Humungousaur's arms and chest, creating a familiar core-like growth as planet-like rocks began to form.

"Oh no. No-no-no! Not again!" Fistrick roared out as Humungousaur's hand went out, glowing a bit as he smirked a bit, slamming him around the room.

"YOU. ARE. SO. OBNOXIOUS!" Humungousaur roared out as Fistrick groaned a bit as Ben turned back to normal, with the giant down and out. "Okay, that was fun...better take this out." Skurd nods as he sparked up a bit with Heatblast's fire before lasting it out towards the base. "Ben?"


"On it." Ben said as he slams down, turning into Telebug. "Telebug!" He said as his antenna's shined a bit, as Skurd turned grew out Squidstrictor limbs before Telebug concentrated hard, making them all vanish as the star device exploded.

(The next day…)

(Village square. May 5th, 08:45)

After the insanity of the other night, Ben and his friends had Fistrick and the Miners incarcerated within Wat-Senn's makeshift jail...with Kundo standing in front of his people in front of the jail, a dark scowl on his face. "This is a mistake…" Kundo sneered as Wat-Senn gave him a scowl.

"Sorry ta burst ya'll's bubble, partner. But you turned your own village into an isolated police state. The Plumbers ain't too kindly on that. And your people have spoken. As of now..you are to step down as the village elder." Wat-Senn said, as he gave a frown and slapped a device on his wrist, making him sneer. "AND under house arrest for assaultin', manipulation and many other accounts we can talk 'bout later."

"This is absurd...who is going to run this village when I am locked away like an animal? Or continue the work of Revonah Kai?!" Kundo sneered as Zarif walked up, smirking a bit.

"My elder was my mentor. Said I had the best skills in Revonnah Kai in many harvests, so the villagers here all said they'd like me to take over." Zarif smirked as Kundo growled in rage, as Rafi walked up, making him look in shock.

"And I am now the head of the village council. Sorry, Kundo." Rafi said, though her smirk showed she wasn't being genuine as he was taken along.

"You will all see! You need me! I am going to fight this, you hear me?! And when I do, you are all going to see I am right!" Kundo roared in anger, while Da just watched with Bralla.

"Hmm, the land has been kind despite the setbacks...and our son has helped bring a better future." He said as he saw Jury Rigg messing with the metal of the now broken harvesters, making something with it.

"Hmm...I call that art, don't you?" Skurd stated in satisfaction, as Da looked in shock as a small tear appeared in his eye, as Jury Rig smirked a bit.

"Yep-yep-yep. Granny Rook told us how Fra looked...and jut went from there." Jury Rigg said with a smirk as, using the metal and crafting it, he made a metal statue of a young Revonnahgander dressed in a orange attire with a sickle in hand, but wearing a Plumber's badge on his right side of his chest.

"That is...very kind of you, Mr. Tennyson...thank you." Da said, as Jury Rigg gave a smirk...but then heard a squeal of excitement as the two turned to see Rook being tackled hugged by Rayona, who was smiling eagerly.

"Yes, Rook Blonco! I accept!" She said, as Rook just chuckled a bit as Da grew curious...but then smiled as he saw the yellow gem on her forehead as Young One came up eagerly.

"Did you ask?" Young one asked as Rook nods, smiling at his younger brother as Rayona hugged him tightly. "Hurray! Rayona is now my sister!" Rayona smiled at him and ruffled his head.

"Heh, nice!" said Jury Rigg as he turned back to normal...only not wearing his usual attire, making the Rook family matriarch and patriarch stare at him oddly, Rook to look in utter shock and Young One to stifle a laugh while Rayona giggled.

"What? We were told Ben here is wearing traditional attire for the festivities." Skurd said, as Ben was currently clad in a dark violet robe with stylized flowers on the lower part of it and black rims, with a 5-pointed headdress. Skurd was even wearing the headdress, showing he was part of the attire. "He even gave me the ceremonial headdress."

"..." All the Rooks began to laugh at this as Bralla says, "M-Mr. Tennyson...that is a woman's traditional attire." Both Ben and Skurd went dead silent as they saw Shar, Shim and Shi come out with Julie, all talking and wearing similar attire as Julie stared at Ben...and bit back a laugh.

"...Well, looks like one of us needs to change." Julie smirked as the two gave the child a death glare, who was snickering a it.

"...Our dignity may be dead now..but you are going to join it!" Skurd said as Young one laughed and ran away from the now angry shapeshifters, who chased after them.

"Get back here, you little stinker!" Ben said as the Rook family all shared a laugh at the hijinx, they all finding it funny to see the hero of the galaxy dressed in female's clothing. Rook watched as he saw his father laugh in the first time in a long while, as well as seeing his shy younger sister showing more enthusiasm. He gave a small smile as he kissed Rayona's head and looked to the sky, looking at the sight of the many suns over their heads, that shined down on the memorial of Rook Fra, his plague placed on the bottom part of the statue.

End of Episode 10

Well, that as an insane time. I like to thank Wildgun-Edge and Chann101 with their help in this, as well as Kevfilms2x2 and many others who helped me this far. Especially to Edge as one of my new Beta-Readers and helped with a lot of concepts here. Next time is a more...original episode and apologies for the long wait. Here's the bios for the two new aliens:

Slamstrike (Based on Zigwolf's version but my take): A large, red creature with a humanoid build and a black helmet-styled head with yellow-green eyes, but with a large mouth on his abdomen with large teeth and black lips, medium-sized arms with fairly large four-fingered hands in comparison to a human (akin to a gorilla's), yellow bulbs on his arms and dinosaur-like feet and a long tail, clad in a white pair of pants with black boots and white and black gloves with elbow-length sleeves attached, the Omnitrix insignia on his neck area attached to a collar of sorts.
Powers: Has super strength (is equal to Four Arms in strength) with a powerful grip, high durability but has the ability to create energy that can create a shockwave from slapping his hands together in a clapping motion or, with a palm strike, can create a small burst of force that can knock out opponents with a rapid fire attack, releasing multiple energy attacks.
Weaknesses: Large size can make him kinda klutzy, his strong hands aren't delicate enough to pick up something without squishing/crushing, can't fit in some structures, can't always control where his 'palm beams' can go.
Species: Makuyama
Home World: Nobunda (named after the warlord who popurliazed Sumo Wrestling, Oda Nobunaga)
Voice Actor: Patrick Seitz (Star Platinum from Jojo's Bizzare Adventure)

Uniburn (Based on Zigwolf's version but my take): is about 9 feet tall with white furred equine creature with a humanoid being with three-fingered hands that have thick hoof-like hands, a muscular but lean build with a black mane tied in a ponytail with a curved blue horn coming out of his forehead, yellow-green eyes with black pupils under a spartan-style helmet and wearing black armor with white padding, with his lower body connecting to a strange looking 'wheel'-like protrusion that looks like a large orb made out of a sort of pearl-like shape, with his belt having the Omnitrix insignia on it.
Powers: Is able to move at supersonic speed (About 300 mph), can store kinetic energy into his pearl-like sphere to store up energy to create powerful pulses of kinetic energy, can absorb kinetic energy from other attacks if able to prepare for it, and can do the following with stored energy: Can double in speed for a short burst to create a sonic boom, can shoot out orange-sized balls of energy from his horn and can even create a sort of miniature explosion if absorbed enough kinetic power.
Weaknesses: Wheel-like sphere on where legs would be for movement can make him trip up if something gets in the way, can't absorb energy besides kinetic, can't always stop on a dime and has to slow down manually before he can stop his charge, needs to prepare for combat-based absorbing to keep up, and can over charge himself if he doens't expell the energy fast enough.
Species: Accelicorn
Homeworld: Motoquine
Voice Actor: Wayne Grayson (Joey Wheeler from YuGiOh)

And here's the second part. Gotta love it when the thing goes wonky like this, right? Well, thanks again :iconbrave-king-shishio: for your help on this, as well as :iconchann1:, :iconzigwolf:, :icondarinas:, :iconholycrap1992: and :iconkevfilms2x2: for ideas.

Synopsis: Ben and Julie go with Rook to a harvest festival on his home planet, though Ben has a hard time fitting in with Rook's family, which leads to some awkward moments with his much more stingy parent. But Ben can get a second chance, as he has to help stop Fistrick and Vulcanus from taking the food supply from the people of Ravanha.

I do not own anything except for original characters. And even then, they are based on stuff from Man of Action and Cartoon Network.

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Okay, firstly, I would like to apologise for taking so long before actually reading this thing. I've been busy with a couple projects (as well as the looming threat of exams) and I finally got a chance to read through this. Personally, I think this episode (at least so far) is my favourite of the season.

The biggest reason why I'd say that this one is my favourite is because of the sheer amount of expansion to the lore of the Revonnahganders and their way of life. The first part of the episode alone gave the reader more information on how the Revonnahganders live than most species have been given throughout the entire canon, and the mere mention of the Revonnah-native Pyroxivore species got me ecstatic, as it hints at subspecies, something that way too many games, movies and TV shows neglect when it comes to creating a new species to use.


Another excellent addition was the use of Slamstrike and Uniburn here, and the addition of energy attacks to Slamstrike in particular was interesting (kinda reminded me of the “energy claps” Four Arms used in Protector of Earth).


A major standout was the villains...minus Fistrick. Vulcanus was an awesome addition and Kundo was great, but Fistrick...ugh. The sexist remarks, at least in my opinion, didn't really add anything to him and detracted from the canon version, who at times showed decent qualities, rather than being the stereotypical Politically Incorrect Punk shown here. If I'm going to be honest, the characterisation of Fistrick ways the second part down a lot.


Overall, the first part is fantastic, and the second part...is good, but, again, Fistrick ways it down a lot. However, the action and the characterisation of the cast (other than Fistrick) does make up for a lot of it.